Oh this is great~ I'd love to caption it if given the opportunity ^__^ (though I don't know how to use the google program so I would have to write it on a document and send it to you). The villainess is quite cute and I just love the strings, a much needed touch for this one.
Edit: Also, I enjoyed what you had Jupiter turn into, quite clever given her background in martial arts. Everyone else was spot on as well.
Double Edit:
Next part of akoutifreak, the 3rd senshi makes her appearance
http://akuotifreak.blog103.fc2.com/b...y-22.html#more