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Unread 10-19-2010   #5
bagman1
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Re: In need chapter 2

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Me likes it. Well except for that part with the dying. Otherwise pretty good stuff.
Yeah that was an idea i had last min, i honestly didint like it either, but i wanted to shift a focus to Susan as a main character, and it seemed if i kept Jill around there would be of a need to focus on her.
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