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Re: Midna BE Story
Thanks, Lock.
It's time for answering some replies again.
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Originally Posted by Ryu_Knight
wait you saying that you don't save your chapters? what do you write them on? I figured that you used word and kept them on hand for when you write the next chapter so you can make them flow together
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I mostly use this topic. I'm a little paranoid about people finding this stuff about my computer, so I just assumed it was safe on this site...
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Originally Posted by vincent_richter
Now, all that being said, I think you're doing a fantastic job, MagicWritings; suffice it to say, I can hardly wait to see this whole thing in book format (that can wait until a proper ending is established, though). 
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Thank you! Book format, huh...?
I don't know if we'll ever get to a real real ending. We can probably close down this main story line some time, but large breasted Zelda characters have a timeless charm... I must admit.
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Originally Posted by vincent_richter
ANYWAYS
Magic, would you mind if I reconstitute this whole thing into a book-format PDF when all is said an done? This is turning into quite the epic story. 
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Feel free. We also need to dig up the drawings Grim made for this story - might be fun to put them in there as well. Illustrated stories have an extra charm. I didn't get a response to the PM I sent a while ago, though, so I don't know if we can somehow acquire a personal approval. We might just have to credit him and see if he cares.
Thanks a lot for your kind words.
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Well, the "responding to responses" minute is over. Back to the story... or rather, one of the perverted in-between parts that doesn't have that much of an impact on the story but is fun anway.
Might be a few grammar and spelling mistakes around. Feel free to point them out.
However distractive the pleasure might be, Zelda tried hard to focus on the matter at hand. Her physical state was different, but not extremely difficult to work with yet ? if she could somehow stop the transformation now, there would be little harm done in the end.
But no matter what solution came to mind, it turned out to be impossible somehow. And the more there seemed to be no solution, the harder it became to think. Her body didn?t stop growing for a moment, and the panic made Zelda feel like her breasts were dragging her down.
She fell down on one knee, noticing her breasts bounce noticeably as she hit the cool grass with a soft thump. ?Well,? she said to herself in an attempt to calm the panic, ?The dark one with the red hair didn?t seem awfully bothered, and she?s a few times as big already??
With that, she nearly just gave in to the transformation ? she closed her tired eyes, and brought her hand to her forehead. But as she did, she noticed a soft glow through her closed eyes and opened them again. The Triforce of Wisdom on her hand lit up brightly.
Without thinking for another moment, she called onto it ? surely, the Triforce of Wisdom could somehow alter this otherwise irremovable Curse? She found that she was able to change the effect of the Magic, but not remove it.
Now knowing the risk, she briefly opened her eyes and rose back to her feet with some effort, In the reflection of the window, she saw a sight she hardly believed. From the point when she had begun to find solutions, minutes ago, her breasts had nearly doubled in size.
Not only that, under her ever thin waist her hips had begun to widen even further, nearly surpassing her shoulders in width. Turning, she noticed her butt was both big and curvaceous ? it nearly rivaled her breasts.
She also noticed that the growth was still going on ? seconds after ?nearly doubled? and ?nearly surpassing? had crossed her mind, her breasts had quite reached twice the size they had been minutes ago and her hips beat her shoulders in width.
?This? has to stop!? she said, finally making up her mind. ?By the Goddesses, I, Zelda, the holder of the Triforce of Wisdom demand that this Magic will not change my physical appearance any further!? she said, raising her hand up high.
In an instant, the persistent pleasure faded. For a moment, Zelda hoped it would be that easy ? but then, instead of pleasure, she began to feel a stinging pain in her breasts and buttocks. ?Just lower your hand and take back that command?? a voice whispered in her ear.
Zelda shut her eyes, and tried to banish everything from her mind as she mentally fought the Curse with the power of the Triforce. She couldn?t help but notice that at this time, her body was still fiercely growing ? as though the Curse still wanted to change as much as it could.
But eventually, both the pain and the growth weakened down. She was breaking the power of the Curse, or at least weakening it, she observed triumphantly. A few more seconds, the Curse resisted and whispered its commands to her, but it all faded into the wind.
Zelda opened her eyes. She observed herself quite neutrally in the window?s reflection, making mental notes of possible disadvantages and the cost of the damages done to her Castle. She had grown even larger than seconds before, but she didn?t seem to mind a lot.
But a voice, not that of the Curse, seemed to whisper to her: ?do not celebrate yet? the Curse has no power over your physical appearance, but it is still there?? Princess Zelda took note of the warning, but wasn?t sure what it meant.
Then she felt something. The pleasure had made her nipples perky almost constantly, but this time, she felt it more clearly ? maybe because the rest of her body had calmed down, she thought.
She had a strange, warm feeling in her breasts that seemed to spread out more and more, and made them feel heavy. She almost imagined they even became a bit larger. ?What? what is this?? she said, confused.
In the split second that followed, where an incredible building pleasure began to stimulate her nipples, she thought back of what Nabooru had done just minutes ago. ?M... ah? milk?? she stammered, trying very hard not to give in to the pleasure.
As though it had been a long awaited password, immediately Zelda?s nipples began their long anticipated work ? two streams of warm milk sprayed from her breasts and her pleasure reached a peak that made it surge through her entire body.
However calm and collected, she could not hold it in any longer. The pleasure she felt was beyond what she had ever experienced before. She didn?t even care any more who heard, let go of her control and began moaning as she let herself fall on her big butt.
She began stimulating her nipples, which made the feeling better and better. All her moans could?ve filled books as only minutes went by, when she heard the voice that sounded awfully familiar. ?Now? take back the command you made with the Triforce?? it said gently.
?Oh? oh? I? uh?? Zelda stammered through her moans in response, much too preoccupied to resist or give in. Temporarily letting one hand do the work, she lazily looked at the Triforce on the other.
?Yes, that?s it. Now tell it you take back the command?? the voice went again. ?You don?t have to, but it?ll make the feeling ten times as good?? Something told Zelda she should ask something else entirely from the Triforce, but her mind was clouded.
Zelda looked at the Triforce, still sleepily, and began stammering through her moans again. ?I, oh.. ah? take back?? she began, when another hand appeared all of a sudden. It was the Hero of Time, who quickly put his left hand to her right and whispered something.
The flow of milk slowed down gradually, and then faded and Zelda blinked a few times. Then she covered her face with her hands. ?I was weak,? she said. ?No, you were not. That Curse! It?s to blame for everything,? Midna said, who had followed the Hero with the other Link.
?But we?ve found something out? if two Triforce pieces are combined like we just saw... a person can break the Curse. But only if they are both strong willed and powerful?? Saria said ? she had been standing behind the others, not wanting to see Zelda in her current position.
?But the Curse spreads much easier than it gets cured. It was a hassle to fix one person up ? and hundreds, maybe thousands are Cursed already. And if so many are Cursed, the Curse itself could use incredible force to stop us from weakening him?? Midna said thoughtfully.
?Well,? Zelda said, standing up and wiping the remaining milk from her body, ?we have a way to fight this Curse, at least. Let us use it in stead of mourning the lack of a better method.? The others agreed.
After some new clothes had been arranged for Zelda, the group began to discuss their plan to cleanse the kingdom of the Curse.
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