[jimroberts]

I enjoyed this story quite a bit. Good plot progression, good story, interesting bits throughout.

I've pointed out before that DreamTales seems to be more conservative in each story, likely due to pressure as to how some people perceive AR. Personally, I think more "money shots" would help the exact same story - this one had no nudity, very slow process, and only one very tiny loose clothing shot. As someone else pointed out - maybe Betsy finding her padded bra and wondering how she ever wore such an enormous thing (maybe even trying it on) might help, or not having Lauren always in a bra, or a bit more active process.

I'm not a big fan of meanness/revenge/getting even in AR/AP, although I agree that's a major plot point in all the Betsy/Lauren stories, so for those who like this, accentuating the teasing/control might help.

Overall, a great story that could have been even better had Dreamtales showed more process in action.

I definitely give this story a thumbs up, and encourage everyone to get it.