Re: April Takes on the World (GTS BE VORE)
I was initially going to ignore this because you are quite obviously trolling but perhaps you could use a little perspective yourself. First of all, you seem to be mocking the fact that my warning was ill placed, take note that there is a warning in the title...you can't be much more straightforward than that.
Then you seem to try and mock the realism, this is sorta funny because it is a story about a woman BECOMING A PLANET. Sorry, but realism was never a factor in this story...and so "realistic" biology never ever crossed my mind... because of the you know...becoming a planet thing.
Only someone mentally challenged could stumble into the vorish aspects of this story unknowingly. Unless you click and read everything you see blindly, but then I'm not sure how you would be reading at all?
I applaud you at your attempt at creating a realistic troll story...but then how did your story ever get to the point of there actually being a giant person? If you knew anything about physics or anatomy you would also know that someone that large would simply crumple over themselves in a heap of broken bones. So while your at it you may as well write a little story for EVERY single one of the stories posted in this section.
Keep these things in mind next time.
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