[frice2000]

This isn't bad. It definitely deserves a comment at least. A lot of stylistic problems and it reads a bit awarkwardly though. Try reading your dialogue out loud while writing it it'll make things flow more naturally, though with I assume English not being your first language that makes things a bit harder. Also really needed some more grounding in the alien setting you established. Other then those complaints was a pretty interesting story. Thanks for sharing.