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Originally Posted by Lord T Hawkeye
No, the story has come to a screeching halt to give us backstory. I'd say easily almost half the pages recently are exposition with no advancement in the plot. When a comic is updated infrequently, that's even MORE reason to keep the exposition snipped.
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The writer is merely building the story up. And time-frame should't be an excuse to change how the story is told. Sometimes the pieces that took a long ass time are the best. I mean you say because of the few updates the writer should illustrate more action. I think that non-stop action is worse than having lots of back-story. That's my non-professional opinion as a writer and professional opinion as a reader.
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Ooh, how dare I give constructive criticism. Authors should never have to deal with that! That was sarcasm by the way.
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You gave criticism to the writer on..the..process..forum.....?
Wonderful idea! I'm absolutely sure the artist will totally get that and your 'criticism' changed how he sees life. Thank you from all of us for helping making that writer suck less.
That was sarcasm by the way.
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That's called being proffesional.
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What, where?!