[shrinky428]

All these suggestions and comments are great, but I think they may focus too much on plot. The plot is secondary to other elements, like effects shots and acting. Good acting alone can make a clip good, even if the other elements are lacking. How does it work exactly? Do you give the models a script or do they improv the whole thing, or do you give them some general ideas or lines, etc...? Some of the girls are definitely better at it than others.

I personally would like to see more of a progression in the quality of the effects shots and how they cut together to create the illusion of shrinking. That includes more costume levels, more attention to details like matching the ratio of the costume to the shot more accurately, general match-on-action effects and size matching from shot to shot, and a greater variety of shots in general. If you are shooting on a greenscreen you have more latitude regarding what kinds of shots you can use. How does the production work, do you have a shot list or are you working off of a storyboard or do you just work from a general idea? Also, I don't know if the sleeve effect is working that well. You should use a wider sleeve, the tight stretchy material gives away that it's a reversed shot. The shirt shot sometimes looks like a blob of white space with little discernible detail. All the shrinking spurts should feature the clothes growing on her more slowly, but each shot showing a little of it so it takes the same screen time. The way it's cut now her right hand shrinks, her left hand shrinks, then her feet shrink, it's all cut in such a way that makes it look like she's shrinking in pieces. Also I think the shirt falling off the shoulder effect is a personal favorite request. It works really well in Shrinking Dreams 3 with Cali Logan where it was very difficult for her to keep it from falling off one shoulder first, then both shoulders at the same time! Very hot.

Anyway, since we're all chiming in on what we'd like to see in the future, that's my input. Thanks for the great vids so far and I always look forward future releases!