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Originally Posted by cyero
I was in fact going for an in media res thingy with that... And my main problem in absolutely EVERYTHING I do is I don't describe. Ever. It's a very bad problem for a writer, I know.
And I can too ask people what's wrong with my story! Otherwise, nobody'll ever offer.
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yea having probems with discribing things can be a problem, I have that too when I write excepte I discribe too much and it ends up a massive pile of words,
in media res thingy? never heard that term I'm not much of a writer so thats greek to me
[yea I know I'm out of alot of loops]
you can request critiques but you made it sound like you were demanding it, I would be careful in how you word something here as some people [like what I did] tend to use that to fly off the handle and rant at you