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Bareon · 03-23-2011

Well.. since you already know about the anatomy problems.. let's try... altering that Jock Strap a bit. >.<;;

If you really want criticism about the image then.. uh.. okay.. lets see..

The hands are in a rather awkward position in the middle, which would only be possible if her arms had two elbows, try waving your own arms around in front of a mirror and pretend those breasts are in your way, and you'll quickly see what I mean. Hands would be more realistically placed near the top, the sides or the bottom because of the way they can twist.

The waist is a bit narrow from the hips, and could do with a bit more transition, as in instead of a sharp corner there, you could ramp it gradually inward.

Feet and hands are just plain awkward to draw, unless you trace images of shoes or hands in many positions. A mini art mannequin does wonders for this, but not many people want to lug one around. (no I don't have one and hence my feet and hands still kinda suck when I draw em)

03-23-2011	#4
Bareon I'm not excited. Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Viewing the stars of the future. Posts: 944	Re: Blackvioxx's Junkheap Well.. since you already know about the anatomy problems.. let's try... altering that Jock Strap a bit. >.<;; If you really want criticism about the image then.. uh.. okay.. lets see.. The hands are in a rather awkward position in the middle, which would only be possible if her arms had two elbows, try waving your own arms around in front of a mirror and pretend those breasts are in your way, and you'll quickly see what I mean. Hands would be more realistically placed near the top, the sides or the bottom because of the way they can twist. The waist is a bit narrow from the hips, and could do with a bit more transition, as in instead of a sharp corner there, you could ramp it gradually inward. Feet and hands are just plain awkward to draw, unless you trace images of shoes or hands in many positions. A mini art mannequin does wonders for this, but not many people want to lug one around. (no I don't have one and hence my feet and hands still kinda suck when I draw em)