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Adobeman10 · 03-25-2011

Not bad, not my favorite-But Im sorta Anally retentive that way and like a lot more humiliation in the story. Very Archi-esque in my viewpoint. Art-not bad, I give it a 6. Idea of Story-good I give it an 8. execution of story-again my personal viewpoint and I wanted more strife between the sisters and less cuddliness-so I have to give it a 5.

All in all, I rate the story a 6.5 on my scale. Very well done and well worth the price of admission. Not a classic, but nowhere near a bomb.

Very well done, any idea of the next AR-Humiliation type story though? I love the Palcomix, and the Pepper Pair did AWESOME on that Big Splash story. That one grew on me, I was eh-ok at the beginning and it got better with time.

Whats up on the horizon? And pleas dont say AP or Giantess storys. lol

03-25-2011	#4
Adobeman10 Process Fan Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 50	Re: Alyssa the Witch Little Sister (AR / AP comic by Dan Parent) Not bad, not my favorite-But Im sorta Anally retentive that way and like a lot more humiliation in the story. Very Archi-esque in my viewpoint. Art-not bad, I give it a 6. Idea of Story-good I give it an 8. execution of story-again my personal viewpoint and I wanted more strife between the sisters and less cuddliness-so I have to give it a 5. All in all, I rate the story a 6.5 on my scale. Very well done and well worth the price of admission. Not a classic, but nowhere near a bomb. Very well done, any idea of the next AR-Humiliation type story though? I love the Palcomix, and the Pepper Pair did AWESOME on that Big Splash story. That one grew on me, I was eh-ok at the beginning and it got better with time. Whats up on the horizon? And pleas dont say AP or Giantess storys. lol