Ok, here's two more parts. They're not quite finalized, so I may end up adjusting things at some point. I want to mention that I'm trying to appease several different styles of transformation as I go along. Some are sort of weird, more sexual in nature, some are just the basic old transformation thing. I'm really working to get a nice description of the changes as they happen to Sally, and eventually I'll try to get some other fetishes in there. The only problem I have at the moment is that some fetishes aren't really my "thing" so to speak, as each change I try to keep somewhat sexual or sensual in nature, like you really get that idea that it's an enjoyable thing. Some fetishes like shrinking don't leap out to me in a very sensual way, but I think I want to at least try to write something for every taste, so please bear with me.
Thanks for the comments, I appreciate the kind words.
