There's talk about that later with [REDACTED] to a degree. There's even another character added later that [REDACTED EVEN MORE]. There is a lot of sex and transformation in the story but I tried to put some good humor and an actual plot as well.
What I avoided was making a story that drags on and takes itself too seriously. You won't find sentences like, "She gazed longingly at him, her heart beating faster and faster. She wanted him to hold her in his strong, powerful arms and rescue her from the tedium of her daily existence. Her soul cried out for release and only he could give it to her..."
Or any of that bullshit. Heh. The only beatings are where [REDACTED] does [WHOA] to [SOMEBODY]. Also, Sarah doesn't need help from anyone
I've left some openings for another story after this if it does well and some things are kept slightly mysterious so we'll see!