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Originally Posted by godleydemon
I'll take a gander at it tonight before bed, and I'll give you a quick review if my cigarettes hold out.
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you have everything set now for some more attribute theft, she said kisses, not what type of kisses. So three more attributes can be taken, after the first kiss will she deny the second and have her breasts returned? you have a very good start here and an extremely good writing style. Keep it up, and talk to Max, he drifts around these forums and this thread quite often. He would be very happy to include your story series in his yahoo group which is devoted to attribute theft.
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I also included this story in GD's interesting finds, where I have a store of stories and such that I've found interesting and write reviews for them.
http://www.process-productions.com/f...ad.php?t=23838 |
Now I feel like a haunting ghost. LOL
Seriously, nice story there my friend and as I mentioned in DA, it has a lot of potential. I really hope you continue it.
Max