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Originally Posted by LycanDope
Do you think Unchained did better on the dialogue? This was the first thing I've written and although I spent more time polishing it, I feel like I did a little better with Unchained for some things. Dialogue and descriptions and story - I mean, there wasn't even any sex and The Change drowned in sex. I was honestly surprised I could write 30,000 words without a sex scene  |
Yes, I think you did better with dialogue in Unchained. This might be related to the perspective you used, though - The Change is exclusively first person, which forces you to write descriptively from one perspective, rather than the third person perspective of Unchained. Or it could be down to you getting better at writing as you go along...
And yeah, I did read it in the order Skin > Unchained > The Change... mainly because I don't like putting down money on something unless I know that the author/artist is good. I've been burned too many times by paid-for material that was low-quality. Thankfully that's not the case here!