Re: Dungeon & Dragons & Expansion (BE, TF, MB, FMG)
Well of course it's one of the most extreme TFs I've read, but you did it fine and well wtitten; I got kinda sad for her though, even with the seemingly 'happy' ending, two gals had it really rough from then on. (Slime girl & dryder vs mid-ogre & BE girl)
Last edited by Lonebeatle; 09-07-2011 at 10:30 PM.
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