This is pretty damn good. I feel that the growth may not be as detailed as it could be, and that the sexual aspect of the story is a little underplayed. However, I can definitely see this as an ongoing serie where that particular aspect get explored further as the Sorceress grow into her own sexuality.
Overall I really like the style of it. And the characters are pretty nice. This has really become my favorite
when-is-the-next-chapter-coming-out-I'd-like-to-see-what-happens-next story. I can't wait for one of the girl to finally lose it, get overwhelmed with lust and go wow-size. I thought that that was it with the Princess, but... well.
Do you have any other BE story floating around? I'd like to read more.
Keep it up! You've definitely got a fan here!