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Originally Posted by DevonCory
This is pretty damn good. I feel that the growth may not be as detailed as it could be, and that the sexual aspect of the story is a little underplayed. However, I can definitely see this as an ongoing serie where that particular aspect get explored further as the Sorceress grow into her own sexuality.
Overall I really like the style of it. And the characters are pretty nice. This has really become my favorite when-is-the-next-chapter-coming-out-I'd-like-to-see-what-happens-next story. I can't wait for one of the girl to finally lose it, get overwhelmed with lust and go wow-size. I thought that that was it with the Princess, but... well. 
Do you have any other BE story floating around? I'd like to read more.
Keep it up! You've definitely got a fan here! |
Thanks for the appreciation!
As for the expansion itself, I know, I have issues drawing it out. I'm trying to work on making it more detailed.
I have no other BE story going, but I have been mulling over TG shorts whenever I come up with ideas.
And as for this one, I've got the next chapter completely planned out, and three more vaguely outlined.