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Originally Posted by DevonCory
Honestly, I think you could have done without completely. With a chapter like this, you show that you're no longer writting a BE story. You're writting a story, with BE in it. It might be an important aspect of it, but it's not the focal point of it anymore. The characters, their relationship with one another and the way they interact with the world is the main focus of this story now, IMHO.
Don't get me wrong, I still love BE, I still would like to see plenty of it, and I still hope for one the character to go wow-size one of those days. But I think that your characters are now developed enough that we actually want to know more about them, their background and their story, and not just about the color of their panties.
So yeah, I like this quite a bit.
Oh and, I know that it's been established that Tuica does not love Carline 'that way'. Kinda. But I'm still hoping that they eventually get together 'that way'.  Yeah, I'm a softy. Don't tell anyone.  |
The first paragraph... is that a good thing or a bad thing? I can't really tell... and I'm not sure what can fly as far as chapters and density of BE content. Like, I still plan on having it every chapter, but it may not be the focus of the chapter as often, like it used to be.
And a side tangent, I'd like to do a TG short within this same story (involving different characters), but is it worth it to make a new topic for it, or should I just... not? I have no plans on doing any more for that one, but then I also had no plans for more chapters of this...