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Originally Posted by Chaos Echo
The first paragraph... is that a good thing or a bad thing?
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Pretty much what PyroWildcat said. Your last chapter was good enough that it didn't need a BE scene in it. It almost felt forced or out of place. And that's not a bad thing in itself, for it speaks volumes about the quality of your story so far.
Mind you, I still want to see BE in it. I think that you've only scratched at what you can do as far as that aspect of the story is concerned. I think that you can go further in how you can approach it, how you can describe it and how you can make the characters relate to it. But what it means is that, if you want to write something to move the story forward which do not involve or require BE, you can do so.