I agree w/Fake_Name. I like your art style, and I'm interested to see where the comic goes next. But it's very hard to read scanned pencil text, especially when it's kind of small and rather light (I mostly skipped the two long text panels). I would definitely consider just writing out your script and then using a computer program for the text.
Other than that, two thumbs way, way up, Gene. (And Fake_Name, I think your avatar is planning some devious scheme... those closed eyes are just a facade!)
