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Re: Why does that spell even exist? (BE story)
Chaos Echo, writing segments of chapters ahead of time and work on the current one. hahaha
I liked the growth a lot in this last scene, my biggest issue with it is the awkward vibes all over the place. like she was making Alli grow for growth's sake, just to see what would happen. I felt like it was full of sexual frustration rather than tension...
plus, Alli not liking her enlarged behind is disappointing to me but i completely understand the choice.
Great work! the descriptions are as lovely as always!
would love to see a more willing butt expansion recipient who gets more than she bargains for...
can't wait for the next installment!
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Heres the clip on youtube.
Skip to 6:14 for the stuck scene
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uS4NP5Mm4DQ
link provided by smegman9
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