The Process Forum - View Single Post

frice2000 · 01-05-2012

Well that was a pretty good story. I didn't really think it was on the level of your Leopard Lady story though. Just wasn't focused enough with the two transformations was I think the problem. The transformations while very nicely detailed and well written between the two characters was just a little too hard to follow thanks to some of their more exotic natures. Still for the relatively low cost I definitely recommend fans of your other work pick this up was a good read regardless. Like how you broke the mold and had the transformee have a much stronger will then most too, really like that feature in your works to date.

01-05-2012	#9
frice2000 "My way of thanking you" Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 401	Re: Addicted to Grace published Well that was a pretty good story. I didn't really think it was on the level of your Leopard Lady story though. Just wasn't focused enough with the two transformations was I think the problem. The transformations while very nicely detailed and well written between the two characters was just a little too hard to follow thanks to some of their more exotic natures. Still for the relatively low cost I definitely recommend fans of your other work pick this up was a good read regardless. Like how you broke the mold and had the transformee have a much stronger will then most too, really like that feature in your works to date.