[Dynamoob]

Just read it, thought it was OK.

The story-telling could use some work, as far as character development and plotting are concerned, and I felt the whole genie aspect could have completely been removed. The emphasis of the story was on the body-altering iPhone app, and probably should have let that concept stand on its own and carry the story.

The BE is a bit insignificant to the story: it isn't at all the focal point it should be, but rather as something that just happens in passing as the narrative progresses.

Also, your prose is very matter-of-fact, just announcing events as they occur without pausing to expand or delve into key events. It should take some time, build tension and intrigue, and elaborate on the characters (what they're thinking and how they're feeling) to help better connect the reader the the situations being described. Otherwise you don't really get the emotional and sexual payoff that readers look for in erotic fiction.