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Very nicely done. Good expressions, decent pacing and panel layout. Your art will improve with time, but with a good little story like this, much can be forgiven/overlooked.
There's a text error in the first panel of the 2nd page. "Even if it did work I doubt it work in only in one day, ya know?" should probably read, "Even if it did work, I doubt it'd work in only one day, ya know?"
Will we see more adventures of Sue and Sally?
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