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frice2000 · 01-26-2012

Nice story. Really could've used some better context and framing though. Also description of setting and appearance could've used some more work but overall very nice transformation.

01-26-2012	#8
frice2000 "My way of thanking you" Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 401	Re: The Good Son Nice story. Really could've used some better context and framing though. Also description of setting and appearance could've used some more work but overall very nice transformation.