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Originally Posted by Nymic
Hey, wrote a short scene/story for a friend that I thought I'd share. If anyone is interested.
Contains transformation obviously. Also nudity and sex.. just so you know! Don't want to offend anyone.
I don't want to ruin any of it so you will have to give it a try if you want to know more. Let me know what you think!
-Nymic
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This is a good story, though it needs just a bit of work. At times, I was a little confused as to what was going on.
And a little more dialogue would also do wonders in relaying information; thoughts, feelings, ect.
Otherwise this story is a decent one, friend.
