[hexen]

Your writing is very good, just felt like there was too much information released at very rapid pace so the story barely had pace. The transformation was nice as well, I'm not a fan of sudden transformations but the "build up til the moment" was very good, I just felt that the transformation itself lacked a bit of description, it felt like in one seccound the lady is shaking on the floor and then she is a male werewolf(?) Again, the choice of detail on a TF is all left to the author so never mind me on that, but I just feel like the narrative lacks an element that grabs me. But misregard my words, I hardly know anything about the English language or writing, so keep up the pace and good work!