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frice2000 · 02-21-2012

Naiad is the most interesting charater in this piece. The rest of the characters are a bit underwhelming. Betty not wishing for anything to reflect on her? Betty feeling no remorse or thought at all for the transformed Manuel? I get that he made her life hell but unless she's quite a mean person herself, which didn't seem to be the case with the first chapter, then she should be more hesitant to 'punish' him. Otherwise it had a neat style. Liked the kind of out there tone of the piece as well.

02-21-2012	#3
frice2000 "My way of thanking you" Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 401	Re: Continuing tg story - praedatorius Naiad is the most interesting charater in this piece. The rest of the characters are a bit underwhelming. Betty not wishing for anything to reflect on her? Betty feeling no remorse or thought at all for the transformed Manuel? I get that he made her life hell but unless she's quite a mean person herself, which didn't seem to be the case with the first chapter, then she should be more hesitant to 'punish' him. Otherwise it had a neat style. Liked the kind of out there tone of the piece as well.