I didn't read through everybody else's comments so let me just say sorry if I made you worry, no your pages are not on the BESC I was just looking for a strong comparison point to elaborate on how high the quality of your work is. I also pick up on how even though the situations your characters are put in are far from realistic, at least this point in time (here's hoping
), the personalities of each character seems to be very real I can't think of any other author in the community who can pull that off. Seeing how long it is taking Maddi to feel comfortable in a world so far out of her comfort zone, and that she doesn't even seem to notice how much she's changed from the start, really seems like how any real person would do it. Maddi is also no longer thinking of her coworkers as the perverted sluts she originally though they were, especially in the latest chapter how she is worried about Angie and thinking more about what her life is like outside the restaurant. Up until now I think Maddi has just thought about these girls being the way she sees them on the job only now realizing they aren't that horribly different from her.