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Unread 04-08-2012   #5
frice2000
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Re: Story: Repopulation

Really a fantastic transformation with some phenomenal detail...But it was hard to connect with the character. I got lots of nice pieces of why and her sad past but there wasn't enough of who she herself was to really make me care about her though I did feel for her circumstances. Still a nice piece and definitely hope to see more from you.
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