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Originally Posted by frice2000
Really a fantastic transformation with some phenomenal detail...But it was hard to connect with the character. I got lots of nice pieces of why and her sad past but there wasn't enough of who she herself was to really make me care about her though I did feel for her circumstances. Still a nice piece and definitely hope to see more from you.
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Well seeing as how everyone has been really supportive I have decided to continue the sequence. In this next one I plan to talk more about Kara and her past, her struggles with coping with such a monumental undertaking, and start looking for ways to maybe tf a few others. I've been working on the outline for the next chapter recently and will probably start back up by next weekend. Again, thank you so much for your feedback, it means a lot to me! Hopefully this next section is as well received.
Karen