These are nice, great job Luxianne.
There are two chapters of the pony TF story now, both beginning in transformations, so you don't have to search through them.
http://toongrowner.deviantart.com/gallery/24726496
Ch. 1 is here:
http://toongrowner.deviantart.com/ga...26496#/d4lc002
Ch. 2 Part 1 is here (if all you care about is the transformation):
http://toongrowner.deviantart.com/ga...26496#/d50bi3v