[godleydemon]

While sitting down and talking to Max tonight we brain stormed an idea I had when walking to my storage units and back. What came of this was this story. Its only the first part but I wanted to know what people thought of it. It still has a bit of a ways to go, but its turning out a little interesting. I'm missing some of the description, such as hair and face, but I promise I"m going to go back and rewrite those bits in. SO just let me know what you guys think.