Re: Derelict Jedi (Star Wars TF)
That was really nice! I love it when a woman turns into something big and powerful. The writing, especially the description of the process was excellent.
I couldn't help myself and looked up Krayt dragons on the wookiepedia, 20 metres is actually pretty small for a Krayt dragon. Do you intend to make her grow further (possibly turn her into a greater Krayt) ? Would be awesome if you did. ^^
Either way, looking forward to part 2!
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