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Originally Posted by Eynimeb
That was really nice! I love it when a woman turns into something big and powerful. The writing, especially the description of the process was excellent.
I couldn't help myself and looked up Krayt dragons on the wookiepedia, 20 metres is actually pretty small for a Krayt dragon. Do you intend to make her grow further (possibly turn her into a greater Krayt) ? Would be awesome if you did. ^^
Either way, looking forward to part 2!
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I actually chose 20 meters based on Jaina's age. Jaina is still relatively young (I dunno, late 20's-early 30' would be my on-the-fly guess). Thus, she mutated into a younger version of a krayt dragon (and thus not as large). She's still big at 20 meters (60ish feet in length), mind you.
Really glad you enjoyed the story and process, and thank you for the feedback! That's really a big part of the reward for me, people's thoughts (positive or negative), and motivates me to write more. Did you have a favorite part? Maybe something you'd like to see more of?
EDIT: Off-topic, just realized I made a silly mistake in the video; should be "Galactic Alliance"... not "Grand Alliance". Oops.
