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villagepeople · 06-12-2012

Paragraphs 8 and 9 were confusing to me. I didn't even realize that they were cutting her leg until after the fact. When you used the word strike, I originally thought that they were just hitting her. Other than that, the rest has been really good. Thank you for writing it!

06-12-2012	#124
villagepeople Process Fan Join Date: Jun 2010 Posts: 33	Re: Why does that spell even exist? (BE story) Paragraphs 8 and 9 were confusing to me. I didn't even realize that they were cutting her leg until after the fact. When you used the word strike, I originally thought that they were just hitting her. Other than that, the rest has been really good. Thank you for writing it!