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Unread 07-24-2012   #45
Peanutt_Buta
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Re: Donkey TF Clip at Taylor's (not yet released)

There is some fur, but it's mostly painted makeup. They do have her grow a kind of mane of fur, but it's very messily done. The wig was unnecessary as I think the actresses hair would've been fine to keep as is.

Don't get me wrong, I love the clip, and I will buy the futa version to support the future of TFs.

I think the best part of this is the actress. Holly was phenomenal but Coco seemed to really be getting into it. Going much further than Holly was able to such as going to all fours and braying a lot though that may have been a limitation to the script Holly had, or the makeup.

The makeup was a little better here, but I was hoping for a snout prosthesis just as the Pig one got, but it still worked out. The teeth were great.

I think really, the only thing that worked out poorly here was the execution. You can do a lot with a little and I think that's what Taylor needs to work on the most. I think the makeup was fine, but if a few certain things could've happened before others, it would've gone a long way to improve the quality. For example, if we had gotten the bucked teeth before her face became a mule would've been better. They should've worked on the subtle parts of the change. The hooves, for example, were good. Her hands cramping in the beginning were great!

So I guess my biggest complaint is the order of the change. I think if they started off with the teeth, the fur (in some places), the tail, then hooves... it might've helped it become more interesting.

My second complaint is the unnecessary wardrobe change and the wig. I understand the wardrobe change, but if it could be made less obvious some how, that would be a big help. I think Holly's wardrobe change from I Want To Be A Pig was more subtle. As for the wig, toss it. In fact, I don't think you need to make the actress bald or change their hair color. I might be in the minority on this, but I like it when the victims keep this small bit of human quality as a reminder of what they use to be.


All right, now I'm rambling and nitpicking!

I'll stop! Can't wait for the Udder TF!
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