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Philcotv · 02-09-2007

Nice BE sequence! Two sequences, actually, since the first 3 panels are so different from the last 4. You could use a transition picture (or text) between panels 3 and 4 to explain why her clothes & hair suddenly changed. The text is a nice addition to the action, and hints at a story. Keep up the excellent work!

02-09-2007	#6
Philcotv Process Fan Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: East coast USA Posts: 55	Nice BE sequence! Two sequences, actually, since the first 3 panels are so different from the last 4. You could use a transition picture (or text) between panels 3 and 4 to explain why her clothes & hair suddenly changed. The text is a nice addition to the action, and hints at a story. Keep up the excellent work! __________________ "Good news, everyone!" BE at my site.