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Amazing Fiction #i (Scorpion T/F)
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Mr GorpThorp
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Re: Amazing Fiction #i (Scorpion T/F)
I'm not really a fan of insect transformation, but this story was pretty good.
The only thing I'd say is get rid of "hundred thousand million". A thousand million is a billion.
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