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That most recent page is done pretty well. I don't know if it was intentional or not, but the punch and the kick make a nice psychic line that communicates the lateral movement of the intended panel flow. I didn't have any trouble figuriong out the panel order this time, very natural.
I'd like to see the revised page 2 if you've got it, or are you planning on reposting the whole first part with word bubbles, etc.?
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