Re: Colorful (Chameleon T/f)
o: Well, most of the story wasn't really planned for dialogue to be honest! That's why there was so much thinking from Kim's part. Funny you should mention Deadpool, 'cause each time I wrote something for Kim I kept thinking about the thought bubbles you can see in Marvel comics such as Spider-Man, when characters think and reason stuff out so the reader can see into their heads AND at the same time get much needed information.
Know what you mean with your critique, but on this particular story I wasn't shooting for the protagonist being face with a lot of conversation. Most of it was action rather than talking is what I'm trying to say I guess!
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