I've done some other work in the mean time since I first posted this, mostly in one big batch over winter break. I took a break to get back into school, but now that things are going steady, I've had time to write. Here are two stories that I just wrote over the weekend:
Storm and Stone: Human to gargoyle TF. A bit shorter than my usual stuff, but I put a bit more work into the style.
Belong to the Sea: Human to...aquatic canid amphibian-type creature.
Both stories are attached below as well, and as always, whatever feedback you can give will be more than appreciated.
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Originally Posted by October 4, 2012
I've recently gotten myself back into the groove of writing TF short stories, and I thought I'd share them. I'm particularly interested to hear if anyone has any feedback or criticism. I tend to post my stories on FurAffinity and while I do get comments, they tend to be fairly general, and it would be nice to hear more specific feedback.
Anyway, here are the three stories. I'll put them up as attachments too.
A Proper Belle: Furry-to-furry TF into a Southern belle polar bear, including TG material. This one's focused a bit more on the mental effects of the change.
Conversion: Human to alien TF, focused on the reactions and struggle to resist transformation. As a warning, there's some gore in it. It's not a very pleasant change. (Also a bit of impregnation at the end.)
The Treasury of the Sphinx: Human to sphinx TF, written after a suggestion that I try to write something without suffering or debasement. It's got a focus on the physical attributes of the transformation.
I'd really appreciate whatever feedback you can give me, whether it's what I'm doing right or what I'm doing wrong. |