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oxdaman · 10-16-2012

And there's chapter 12! Wow, didn't realize that you were trying to add as much transformation and expansion as you could with this one lol.

I imagined Mr T for some reason when Mary turned into a guy lol. And when Katie slugged Mary, I had a sense of Deja Vu. Little story, one time I asked a few guys to smack me for saying something stupid. The first few refused but the last one did. But the way he did it is was what shocked me. I remember the dialogue go like this:

Me: Please smack me!
Boy: Really?
Me: Really?
Boy: Really?
Me: Really?
Boy: Really?
Me: Re- *Thwap!*

I was like he did a quick draw with his hand on my cheek from out of his pocket. Never saw it coming. My friend said that he literally saw my cheek jiggle XD.

Anyway, what surprised me was the Body's response to Shandra's request and what really scared me was it's reaction to Katie's punch. I feel that the trigger that pushes Mary off the deep end will be whatever the Body does to hurt Katie in a way that can't be taken back.

Still reading with great interest!!

10-16-2012	#4
oxdaman Perverted Rock Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 41	Re: New TF Story And there's chapter 12! Wow, didn't realize that you were trying to add as much transformation and expansion as you could with this one lol. I imagined Mr T for some reason when Mary turned into a guy lol. And when Katie slugged Mary, I had a sense of Deja Vu. Little story, one time I asked a few guys to smack me for saying something stupid. The first few refused but the last one did. But the way he did it is was what shocked me. I remember the dialogue go like this: Me: Please smack me! Boy: Really? Me: Really? Boy: Really? Me: Really? Boy: Really? Me: Re- Thwap! I was like he did a quick draw with his hand on my cheek from out of his pocket. Never saw it coming. My friend said that he literally saw my cheek jiggle XD. Anyway, what surprised me was the Body's response to Shandra's request and what really scared me was it's reaction to Katie's punch. I feel that the trigger that pushes Mary off the deep end will be whatever the Body does to hurt Katie in a way that can't be taken back. Still reading with great interest!!