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frice2000 · 10-20-2012

Not bad at all. There's some awkward phrasing throughout but the story itself and the transformation you did was a pretty good read. Thanks for sharing.

10-20-2012	#2
frice2000 "My way of thanking you" Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 401	Re: TG writing short: Feminisland Not bad at all. There's some awkward phrasing throughout but the story itself and the transformation you did was a pretty good read. Thanks for sharing.