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Originally Posted by Sparks
Ok, done. Would have been done sooner, but I wasn't at my computer the whole last four hours.
Sorry if the quality is a bit low, I wouldn't rate it any higher than average, the reason for this being that I did this fairly quickly, and I'm completely exhausted right now. I hope it's adequate enough for you, though.
And here would be a DA link for it.
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It was really well done! Especially given a fairly open premise and turning it around do quickly. It hit on most of the story beats I like to see. Given more time it probably has an opportunity to be fleshed out even more. Kudos and thanks!