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Re: My Four Breast Friends by praedatorius
Well written. I enjoyed it. Not to criticize praedatorius for his well written tale and perhaps to clarify for the nay-sayers, but perhaps an additional paragraph at the begining of the tale identifying Moira's desire for large breasts at all costs would highlight her dark side and the motivations for sacrificing her friends to achieve her goals. This perhaps would have gone a long way to reduce some of the criticism. Well concluded where the other friends pull together to help Moira in her time of need. Just a bonus that they also received a share of their magical toils as well.
As a sporadic author, myself, I am glad when my works garner comments.
NS
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