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Unread 12-16-2012   #49
MageOmega
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Re: New artist, looking for critique

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Originally Posted by Dog_Girl_Kari View Post
I agree that the rib cage bothers me a bit, but the breasts are the thing that stand out the most, in that position they would not be perkily in front of her. They almost appear to be attached at her neck, rather than at the sternum.
I was trying to replicate the pose here seen in figure 7(from memory, i probably should have used a reference. ah well.)
http://yogawisdomforeveryday.files.w...-namaskar2.jpg

But thank you both for the input/critique! I will keep a more observant eye on the arms and ribcage next time i draw.
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