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Rei-Lin said he, or she, wanted feed back so...

The Werewolf Futa Transformation: I am neither a fan of furry nor futa, so I can't say I would much enjoy this clip.

Alyssa?s Secret: Again I'm not interested in furry works, so I'm not so interested in this either.

QUIET TIME: I have to admit, of all the strange things on this site this actually comes off as a bit creepy to me. It just doesn't seem right to me if people should be able to carelessly remove body part however they want so easily. Modification is one thing but removal seems so much different to me. I wouldn't want to see this clip.

I think we've found happiness: I somewhat enjoyed this script. It mildly sparked my interest but, it seemed like it was already a fairly over done topic. It wasn't bad in any way, it just didn't seem all that much different from some other clips I have seen. It was a good script but it wasn't my favorite.

KYMANTHROPY: I'm somewhat on the fence about this script. I like the inflation aspects of it, but certain parts of it creep me out. I can't quite put my finger on what exactly doesn't feel right about this script, but something just seems off to me. Depending on who the actress was and how it was portrayed I think I would like to see this clip.

Sweet Revenge: Not a bad script, but nothing really caught my interest in it. I couldn't say I cared for it either way.

Wonka's revenge: I thought this script was OK. I personally would love to see a darker more evil sort of willy wonka but I kind of feel that this sort of thing was covered a little bit in more recent berry vids. I would like to see this clip.

Party Preparations: I really liked this script. I feel that there haven't really been enough vids like this, that had elements of a sort of master and toy sort of relationship in them. It wasn't overly complicated and got the point across with just the right amount of give and take. I would like to see this become a clip.

DEEP BREATHS: I thought this was a great script. I don't think there has been enough rival inflation sort of clips in the past and I think this would be a great example of one. Even though this is a bit of a rip off of a rather well known horror movie, I would really want to see this clip.

Pressure Luck: This is my favorite so far. It hits on the same sort of rivalry to expand just as "Deep Breaths" does but it does it in a more interesting way I feel. I simply love the idea of an inflation game show! I would love to see this clip.

Sarah?s Power: I'm not quite sure what to think of this one. It's not bad, but it kind of leaves me wanting answers more than being enthralled with the clip. Everyone expects superheros to always have these big back stories and arch enemies and secret weaknesses. The super hero theme just screams for more detail, and I feel like this script would just be lacking too much.

He had it coming: I am not a fan of gender transformations, so I didn't get much out of this one.

Bathtime Beasties: This one is just a tiny bit too creepy for me. I mostly like the overall process but the "thing" in the bathroom just overshadows the rest of the clip too much for me. I don't quite oppose monsters and creatures mind you, its just that they need to come off as less monstrous I guess.

neBEulized: I kind of like this one. The process seems good and I like the theme, but the ninja makes it just a little too silly to make a really good clip. Pretty good but not great.

Now that that's out of the way, here is my script. Enjoy, and good luck everybody.