The first thing I noticed in the first pages, was the Betsy and Lauren cameo.
Very nice.
I liked all the female shrinking sequences.
Also the giantess stucked in the subway was well set.
Consider the great art and that it covers all SW and GTS fetishes, it is for 12 bugs still a fair price!
Why are these japanese girls (even if they don't look ones for me) are called Roppongi Twins?
Literally Roppongi means "six trees" or is a district of Minato, Tokyo.
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These virtual twins were created my Marilyn.
What I missed was to see the interaction how these twins rebel against her.
It would have been fun seeing that these programs were created to defeat Suzy or anything like that, but then decided to turn against their creator instead and shrink her.
A shrunken Marilyn trying to warn Suzy would really fit to this situation!
Like the end of the first SuperSuzy comic, an escaping shrunken Marilyn would have made a great ending. 
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